Currently Untitled

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  1. The action of activity/inattentiveness in a busy household is clear in the is image. It also gives a strong sense of space. I agree with Luna going downstairs which might fix her lighting as well. Perhaps just crop the left side so it is closer to Jake’s tush. The info of the coat rack doesn’t add to the frame and that might tighten it up enough. Also perhaps crop a bit off the bottom (also closer to Jake’s tush) to take out the shiny spot in the floor and bring the viewer closer to the cast of the scene. The title could clue the viewer into the fact that Ghost has underwear…The Boxers Rebellion?


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